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Author's Note: To celebrate the four year anniversary of the On the Banks series (as well as my anniversary as a net writer), I have revived the original characters, and written this revised/Director's Cut version of the original chapter. There were so many errors in that original chapter, be it grammar, spelling or otherwise, and so much I would've changed if given the chance to write it all over again. I took this anniversary as that chance, and I rewrote the fic to how I would write it NOW, and how I should've written it THEN.

I'm calling it Director's Cut, because that sounds cooler than "rewrite" or "revised" edition, even though this is essentially a brand new story written from the original idea. I like this version so much better, I cannot possibly even explain how much. I took out all the pointless parts that didn't need to be there, I fixed all the horrendous and glaring grammar and spelling mistakes, I gave it more plot, I just made it a drastically better fic. Those of you who have read the original will notice the difference from the first sentence. Those that haven't, I really hope you enjoy this.

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Disclaimer: This story if copyright Triple X, and is not to be used under any circumstances without my permission. If you would like such permission, please contact me at TripleX12@gmail.com. This and all of my other work can be found on my website http://theXzone.shorturl.com ...

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