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Like many fanclub members, I guess, I never used to leave feedback for authors. Earlier this year I started to do so, and have ended up exchanging messages with several. After enjoying "Jenny in Amsterdam" by "Jenny S (and Mike)" I left some feedback, telling them how much I had enjoyed the story. Jenny and I exchanged a few messages, and then started to exchange emails. After a while she asked me to write her a story. It's my first story for ES, I'd like any feedback, good, bad or what ever.

As I drive up to your house the door opens, you must have seen me arriving. A last kiss good bye, before you walk towards the car. I am disappointed to see your wearing a coat, about knee length and a dark non-descript grey. Below the hem line things are looking up your legs are sheathed in fine white stockings and on your feet, a pair of silver sandals with straps winding up your legs to end in bows just below your knees. I come around to open the door for you; from closer I can see the deep red of lipstick, like a fine wine, but of too few summers. The palpable disappointment at your attire must have shown on my face, "You'll have to wait, be patient, it gets better". A quick kiss and I open the door for you to slide down into the low slung seats. As you climb in, the coat opens a little to reveal a flash of white silk and the start of the lacy welt at the stockings top. Your right, be patience, things are being revealed. As I climbing back into the car, you ask where we are going, "For dinner, like I said", you want to know where "now it's your turn for patience". ...

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