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This account is a re-written one from a couple of years ago, then called "There's something about Jenny" It now comes with proper punctuation, spelling, and even paragraphs too. As well as a few other improvements.. It took a while, but, I have eventually learnt a lot from this writing game. Thanks for reading it and please let me know what you think of it.

.. Dave

As I got to the park I saw the usual crowd of kids hanging around, sitting on the wall. I walked Max, my German Shepherd around the park for a while most nights. The kids were harmless enough, just bored. They hang around smoking and laughing and pushing each other off that low wall. Some of the girls made a real fuss of Max, I think he quite looked forward to seeing them now.

Lately a few of the girls had been walking around with me. At first they followed me a few feet back, for a giggle stopping every time I stopped and looking casual like they were in the FBI or something on a tailing job. But lately they were getting braver and walked with me, taking turns to hold max, I got to hear all the gossip and got to know them quite well. They didn't seem to worry about the fact that at thirty I was almost a fossil compared with their young ages.

Jenny was older than the others at about eighteen. She was big sister to ...

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