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What started as an ENM or EMBARRASED NAKED MALE story has evolved into a harem story better written and hotter than ALICIA AND THE BIKINI STORE, LIFE STUDIES, ON DEMAND and even BLONDE NEXT DOOR. Besides a bevy of wanton, willing women and lots of humor, there will be sprinkled references to past stories and characters, kind of like ‘Easter Eggs' that they have in movies.

It's important to be clear, Taylor has been planned from the beginning, was originally intended to be named Julie in a tribute to ‘BIKINI STORE', but was changed to Taylor due to recent, current stories using the name Julie. It's part of the humor that John met Jenny and fell hard, met Sophie and thought he was in love, then met Taylor who captivates him. The question remains, since he really prefers Claire, where does her beautiful sister Lexie fit in? Is Taylor really willing to fracture her friendship with Lexie to have John all to herself? And why are Tammy and Lanie described in the opening?

By now you should know, I love to shake things up.

I started this story with an idea in mind, Dennis edited and shared his thoughts, and after I finished the third chapter, we realized this story morphed from what it started out as. I will still put John through plenty of exposure situations when it makes sense, but once Dennis and I realized I had created a fresh, newer, better version of BIKINI STORE, we decided to go in that direction. Based on a discussion with Dennis, I am leaning into my trend where the male character thinks every girl is hotter than the last and all of them want to be with him. Plus, an inside joke from ALICIA AND THE BIKINI STORE, no one ever gets pregnant. If you have ever read an actual harem story or e-book, it's the same formula all harem writers use, next girl up.

It is intentional that I will push John farther than ‘Josh' from BIKINI STORE.

But there will NOT be any ASTON MARTINS or DELOREANS!

I still don't know what to do about the title, based on feedback, most of you don't care, so please let me know what you think. All cliches are intentional, and since the exposure incidents are no longer the focus, when they occur, they will be spread out amidst the romance and overall story for greater impact. The shades of many of my ‘harem' stories are intentional, you will be surprised how it all plays out, and if you read ALICIA AND THE BIKINI STORE or recent gems like ONLY MILF, BLONDE NEXT DOOR, NAKED OFFICE, THE EROS EFFECT and THE SEDUCTION LIST, you have an idea of the sex, fun and mayhem to come.

The opening recap is necessary for archive and new readers, thank you for understanding.

Any people, places, names, products or events mentioned are done so without permission or endorsement, this is a work of fiction. Names have been randomly generated then chosen to suit the characters. Mundane tasks like getting gas, shopping, eating, chores, using the bathroom and minor conversations (aka small talk) are assumed to happen ‘off camera' and are not written or mentioned unless relevant to the overall story. Also, it's important to mention, I never create or describe a character unless he or she is relevant, even if it takes a few chapters before they reappear.

Michelle is 33, 5' 9", has long, black hair, beautiful blue eyes, a fit body, and an amazing smile. My mom's fiancee, we started a torrid affair, with mom's permission, then I met Jenny, Claire, Sophie, Lexie and Taylor. After having sex several times. Michelle has declared she will sleep with me whenever I ask, without question, but demands it continue no matter who I'm with. Michelle manages a successful clothing and accessory store in a strip mall across town.

Jenny is 24, 5' 10", has long blonde hair, bright blue eyes, and is almost perfectly fit, tanned and toned. We quickly became lovers, started dating, and everything was amazing, aside from her homicidal tendencies and extreme sarcasm. Scary and aggressive now that she dumped me, I have a strange feeling there's more to come and am unsure if that's bad or good. A well trained, intimidating Security Officer, Jenny was recently promoted to be David's Personal Security and according to Claire, she is now sleeping with David.

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