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Surprise By Susurrus

An experiment in person and tense, also in the avoidance of "Anglo-Saxon" terms

She came home early, to get everything prepared. All his favorite foods were made and waiting, the house was clean, the table set just so. Her grandmother's candlesticks stood on the table, just to add that little bit of ambiance.

A little bit of time before he got home. Just enough time to get ready.

She went upstairs into the bathroom and fixed her hair, curling it just a little, to give it some shape. He liked it loose, falling down her back, so she didn't bother to do more than curl it and run a brush through it. Next, a little bit of makeup, just to accent her god-given gifts. He doesn't like women who wear a lot of makeup, and that's perfectly fine with her.

After that: clothes. Something special. Or maybe, something she has but hasn't worn in a long time, but knows he likes. Hopefully it still fits. There it is, tucked away in the back of her closet. Oo, didn't realize it was that small. Was she ever really that size? Well, here goes nothing...

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