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Since I don't have a blog, and messaging through ES internal mail only reaches a portion of my readers, LOOSE ENDS seems to serve as the best outlet for information to my fans, my readers, and to everyone on EROTIC STORIES.

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I don't have much of an update except to say despite still looking for work and finding out most people are only your friends when you can offer them something, I fought my depression and chose life. I'm down but not out, and when all else fails, there are great shows on PRIME and PARAMOUNT PLUS, I have DIVISION 2 and EPIC SEVEN. Plus PEPSI doesn't talk back, tell me how much I suck, or sneak around on me.

In all seriousness, the dry spell that began at the end of March when I was fired for a really dumb reason seems to have ended. I created a new story called JENNY AND MICHELLE, a fresh exciting tale with three chapters already posted and two more edited and waiting to post. I also dug in and wrote two new chapters for THE EROS EFFECT, one for THE PRICE OF PERFECTION, and then last night had an epiphany.

Recently I have been reading J.S. DEACON, both his books and his erotica. While some of his content is questionable, his overall theme across books, KINDLE e-books, erotica and erotic comics are women who are pushed to do naughty things using a combination of coercion, trickery and humiliation. For years I have wanted to write a female humiliation story where she is gradually coerced, tricked and humiliated until she is no longer sweet, innocent or pure. A sweet to slutty story without romance and with no morals. It's a dangerous topic, especially in today's HR heavy, lawsuit heavy world.

So I am posting the entire first part or chapter of EXPOSING JULIE because I really want your thoughts, feedback and opinions on the story, then main character Julie, and any other thoughts you might have. Dennis thinks it's great and so do I, but then again, I like my singing voice even though the broken windows and angry cats in the neighborhood disagree.

All humor aside, please read EXPOSING JULIE and let me know what you think.

I'm not asking for "Yeah it's great" or "Worst story I ever read dude." I'm looking for feedback on how it reads, the humor, the situations she ends up in, and does she seem real? Is it exciting, do you want more chapters? I appreciate all of my readers, the occasional reader, the loyal reader, even the one time reader. I also freely admit that EXPOSING JULIE is the story I tried dozens of times to write, changed my mind while writing, and those stories became something else you've probably already read. This is the first time I pushed back my ‘Happily ever after' tendencies and wrote a bold, shocking story.

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THIS IS A PREVIEW VERSION OF EXPOSING JULIE 10/24/25

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This story will be bold, surprising, shocking at times, and is unlike anything I have ever written. No romance, hand holding, flirting or cute moments. If you are easily offended, this is NOT the story for you. I have the utmost respect for women, their choices, and how they are portrayed, but after years of wanting to write this story, fellow erotica writer J.S. DEACON finally inspired me to create this. None of what happens to Julie is meant to offend anyone, could not happen because of HR policies, rules and laws. No means no, and coercion is not permission. That being said, I hope you like it because this is the story I have wanted to write for years.

Any people, places, names, products or events mentioned are done so without permission or endorsement, this is a work of fiction. Names

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