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I recently received valuable feedback regarding EXPOSED AT THE OFFICE both as a whole and the most recent part 6. The loyal, longtime reader asked why I created such a fast paced, descriptive exposure story that was different from most of my other stories, then slowed it down with conversations and romance. He was correct that when Stacy was caught up in her exposure, at first reluctantly, then as she needed the adrenaline and arousal, the story scorched and was captivating.

Then as usual, I bogged everything down with rushed, over the top romance.

Also, if Stacy is discovering herself, her kinks and her slutty side, why constantly drown everyone with romance? In other feedback, I was asked three questions. One, can Stacy end up in more naked exposure situations? Two, can I ramp up the arousal and frustration when she gets in predicaments? It was suggested that not every exposure should result in sex, to let her end up horny and frustrated. Three, can she end up naked and caught, extend her nudity where she can’t get away or can’t find clothes?

The answer is yes to all three, yes to all exposure ideas that were sent to me.

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