Making the Movie (fm:swingers, 6487 words)
|Author: Alden Bradley|
|Added: Apr 21 2013||Views / Reads: 4676 / 3304 [71%]||Story vote: 9.32 (25 votes)|
|Neighbors set out to make believable porn flick. This is a stand-alone sequel to "By Mutual Agreement".|
"What's so damned funny?" I asked her.
"You're taking this so seriously," she pronounced.
"I just want it to be good. We said we could do it better. If we don't have a good story, it will suck."
We were leaning across the breakfast bar, drinking coffee. It was my favorite time of the day because I got to look at my gorgeous wife and drink my favorite non-alcoholic beverage at the same time.
"What's the hang-up?" she asked.
"I've got about four or five different scenarios," I told her. "Each one has various permutations, but I can't decide which one to script."
She chuckled. "All this for a home-made porn flick." She shook her head.
"You agreed to do it," I reminded her.
"Yes, I did. And I'm not backing out. I just think it's funny that you're getting so wrapped about it."
"Do you have any ideas?" I challenged.
"I might have one or two. But, for now, if I were you, I'd write down the basic theme for each of yours. The next time the four of us get together, we can all decide."
"That's good!" I said quite cheerfully. "I shouldn't be the one deciding everything. I'm just writing the script. When are we getting together again?"
"Friday," she said, putting her coffee cup down, taking both my hands in hers and leaning forward for a short kiss. "So, you've got two days to collect your thoughts, develop the themes and be ready to present them to everybody."
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